Karel Oni

[deidara93]

Jutsu Name:[/u] Demonic Jab
Jutsu Type:[/u] Taijutsu/Ninjutsu
Range:[/u]touch
Jutsu Description:[/u] Karel's hand turns black and if she jabs you it can destroy your internal organ but not on the first try
Kekkei Genkai (Y/N):[/u] Yes

Jutsu Name:[/u] Pentagram ritual
Jutsu Type:[/u] Genjutsu
Range:[/u] any
Jutsu Description:[/u] A Jutsu that takes much prep but if within a 3 mile radius of Karel. You believe you have been sent to... Yeah. And you can feel the pain of being their but is meant to hold the person down to capture them but can destroy your mind if you do not have engough willpower. You are their for 24 hour till it's over
Kekkei Genkai (Y/N):[/u]yes

[MasterComic]

Ehh...approved for now. Those seem kinda unfair. If you could make some less powerful jutsu?

[deidara93]

Here I'll re-right it

[deidara93]

Jutsu Name: Demonic Jab
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu/Ninjutsu
Range:touch
Jutsu Description: A forceful blow to the Stomach that can make the person faint. when possessed by Ankoku she can make the person gag up blood
Kekkei Genkai (Y/N): Yes

Jutsu Name: Pentagram ritual
Jutsu Type: Genjutsu
Range: long
Jutsu Description: A Jutsu that takes much prep but if within a 3 mile radius of Karel. You believe you have been sent to... Yeah. It will not kill the person because it's meant for capture but it takes much prep before it can be used

is that better?
Kekkei Genkai (Y/N):yes

[MasterComic]

Much better. ;D Approved.

[deidara93]

Thank you